Hand in Hand

Posted on 05 Nov 2010 under Random

Come, take my hand or give me yours. Allow me the pleasure of walking with you, arm in arm, under the soft night sky, littered with the glittering diamonds of stars. At midnight, when the world is still, let us talk in hushed whispers, conspiring to enjoy these moments, to enjoy each other’s company while we’re here. Magic emanates from the lights hung in the balconies, from the moonlight reflected off the leaves. Time stands still, betrayed only by the sneaking of the moon across the sky. The night breeze sighs and the shadows echo your mirthful laughter. Be mine, if only for a while, if only for the night. Come, take my hand or give me yours, tonight.


23 Responses to “Hand in Hand”

  1. Meow, on November 5th, 2010 at 1:56 am Said:

    Be mine, if only for a while, if only for the night. Come, take my hand or give me yours, tonight.

    So beautiful, it breaks my heart. <3^inf.

  2. Gurdit, on November 5th, 2010 at 1:58 am Said:

    :) Why didn’t you post your name? :P

  3. Meow, on November 5th, 2010 at 2:02 am Said:

    Just like that :) Seemed fitting for a piece full of metaphors! :P

  4. madhumita, on November 5th, 2010 at 10:10 am Said:

    after so long smthin lik this.. i like it..

  5. Arf, on November 5th, 2010 at 12:44 pm Said:

    awww. :’)

  6. Anirban, on November 5th, 2010 at 5:55 pm Said:

    No twists or gimmicks in this one. You’re a better person than I am. :)

  7. vkg, on November 5th, 2010 at 6:37 pm Said:

    Awww Gurdit, I love you too!! Thanks! Here, take my hand!

  8. Gurdit, on November 5th, 2010 at 11:43 pm Said:

    @Anirban, Heh…I try. :P

    @vkg, you know I’ll always love you. :*

  9. Ravi, on November 5th, 2010 at 11:55 pm Said:

    Awesome … u make it so real :-)

  10. Gurdit, on November 5th, 2010 at 11:58 pm Said:

    Thanks, Ravi! :)

  11. bo peep, on November 6th, 2010 at 7:37 pm Said:

    tres douce!

  12. Gurdit, on November 6th, 2010 at 7:43 pm Said:

    Merci!

  13. Celeste, on November 7th, 2010 at 12:45 am Said:

    This is really, really very nice.
    Very well-written and very evocative.
    Reminded me of one Robbie Williams song that I’m not ashamed of liking. :P

    But, not to steal your thunder. This is very beautiful.

  14. Wow, on November 7th, 2010 at 12:53 am Said:

    Poetic! Very Good!

  15. Gurdit, on November 7th, 2010 at 12:56 am Said:

    @Celeste:
    Thanks! Which song, btw?

    @Wow:
    Thank you! :)
    I really wish you all would leave your names or email addresses so that I know who you are. :)

  16. Celeste, on November 7th, 2010 at 1:00 am Said:

    Come and Hold my Hand. :D <3

  17. lady gaga, on November 7th, 2010 at 2:00 pm Said:

    wish someone would write like this about me
    sigh!

  18. Aashi, on November 7th, 2010 at 9:10 pm Said:

    :) …..

    reminded me of an old post…

    http://insatiablemelody.blogspot.com/2007/06/not-skylark-in-distance-no-music-to.html

  19. Liwllyn, on November 9th, 2010 at 11:41 am Said:

    A beautiful poetry !!! Loved it….after such a long long time.

  20. Keerthana, on November 11th, 2010 at 3:18 pm Said:

    Awesome! Keep going Gurdit :)

  21. Gurdit, on November 11th, 2010 at 3:21 pm Said:

    Thanks :)

  22. angelle torrejas, on April 12th, 2011 at 1:03 pm Said:

    Be mine, if only for a while, if only for the night. Come, take my hand or give me yours, tonight.
    Wow I like this poem….
    It looks that she begging with his love ones to be there with her that night. But it comes up in my mind that there has a great import regarding this poem I don’t know if someone takes my point….

  23. carson barker, on April 21st, 2011 at 1:21 pm Said:

    Best poetry
    But this is the excellent one
    THINK that I shall never see
    A poem lovely as a tree.

    A tree whose hungry mouth is prest
    Against the earth’s sweet flowing breast;

    A tree that looks at God all day,
    And lifts her leafy arms to pray;

    A tree that may in Summer wear
    A nest of robins in her hair;

    Upon whose bosom snow has lain;
    Who intimately lives with rain.

    Poems are made by fools like me,
    But only God can make a tree.
    I love this poem

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